This is a poem i wrote, tell Me what you think (its my 1st)

As your blue eyes look at me you say,

"Everything  is gonna be okay."

As you kiss my cheek,

You say you will be back at the end of the week,

Or is that just what you say when you kiss my cheek?

As you turn your face away, 

On that ship for you will stay,

As they take you away,

The Army,

For there you will stay.

I hear those cries,

Of all those wives,

Who have gave up their spouse to save our lives.

I will cherish those words you said on that day,

"Every thing will be ok,"

For those mught be the last words i hear you say.

I cant wait untill that day,

When you come back,

And with me you will stay.

-Alyssa Barfield